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My contest entry by Tianibean

:icondelilittle:
Hey there,

I have a few things to say here :)

I really love the eyes. They are beautiful. You'd really suit anthro art. The lines are a bit solid, it is hard to tell if you're going for toony or realistic. I'd suggest going either way rather than having blurred lines (the white chest fur) as well as solid lines. One thing to remember with fur is that it overlaps, so there shouldn't be straight lines on the white, it should be a lot less crisp. Something isn't right in this dogs anatomy, I think the back is too high. I love how you've drawn the chest lineart and how you have used purple in the shadows. I suggest you practice your colour transitions and such and pick a style (either toony/anthro or realistic or something) and really work in it, as this looks like it could go either way. The nose should probably be pink, black or liver as it is on white fur. The hind leg looks very out of place, but other than that, you have a lot pf promise, keep it up, you're getting a watch from me :)
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:iconladyokasu:
LadyOkasu Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the shoulder is the problem in the anatomy, it's very high, she could maybe try to draw the shoulder apart, then a lower line for the back?
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:icontianibean:
Tianibean Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hey, i tried :shrug:
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:icondelilittle:
delilittle Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it ^.^
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:icontianibean:
Tianibean Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
^^; that and i drew this a like 12 in the morning
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